diff --git a/docs/tutorials/hosting_guide.rst b/docs/tutorials/hosting_guide.rst
index 3d18140..719f351 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/hosting_guide.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/hosting_guide.rst
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Hosting on internet
This tutorial aims to guide you to host a collaborative Session on internet.
Hosting a session can be done is several ways:
-- :ref:`host-blender`: hosting a session directly from the blender addon pannel.
+- :ref:`host-blender`: hosting a session directly from the blender add-on panel.
- :ref:`host-dedicated`: hosting a session directly from the command line interface on a computer without blender.
.. _host-blender:
@@ -29,10 +29,8 @@ In order grant server access to people from internet you have tow main option:
Using a connection sharing solution
-----------------------------------
-Many different third party software like `ZEROTIER `_ (Free) or `HAMACHI `_ (Free until 5 users) allow you to share your private network with other peole.
-For the example
-
-I'm gonna use ZeroTier because its free and open soure.
+Many third party software like `ZEROTIER `_ (Free) or `HAMACHI `_ (Free until 5 users) allow you to share your private network with other people.
+For the example I'm gonna use ZeroTier because its free and open source.
1. Installation
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
@@ -45,9 +43,6 @@ Once installed, launch it.
2. Network creation
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-Before trying to connect to any network we need to create one.
-Only the host need to do this step.
-
To create a ZeroTier private network you need to register a ZeroTier account `on my.zerotier.com `_
(click on **login** then register on the bottom)
@@ -75,7 +70,7 @@ Make sure that the field **Access Control** is set to **PRIVATE**.
.. hint::
If you set the Access Control to PUBLIC, anyone will be able to join without
- your confirmation. Its easier to setup but less secure.
+ your confirmation. It is easier to set up but less secure.
.. figure:: img/hosting_guide_network_settings.png
:align: center
@@ -101,9 +96,9 @@ For each user you want to add, do the following step:
:align: center
:width: 450px
- Get the zerotier client id
+ Get the ZeroTier client id
-2. Go to the network settings in the Member section and paste the Node ID into the Manualy Add Member field.
+2. Go to the network settings in the Member section and paste the Node ID into the Manually Add Member field.
.. figure:: img/hosting_guide_add_node.png
:align: center
@@ -151,17 +146,17 @@ Let's check the connection status. Right click on the tray icon and click on **S
The network status must be **OK** (like in the picture above) otherwise it means that you are not connected to the network.
If you see something like **ACCESS_DENIED**, it means that you were not authorized to join the network. Please check the :ref:`network-authorization` section.
-This is it for the ZeroTier network setup. Now everything should be setup to use the multi-user addon over internet ! You can now follow the :ref:`quickstart` guide to start using the multi-user addon !
+This is it for the ZeroTier network setup. Now everything should be setup to use the multi-user add-on over internet ! You can now follow the :ref:`quickstart` guide to start using the multi-user add-on !
.. _port-forwarding:
Using port-forwarding
---------------------
-To setup port forwarding for each ports you can follow this `guide `_ for example.
-To know which port are used by the addon, check the :ref:`port-setup` section.
+To set up port forwarding for each port you can follow this `guide `_ for example.
+To know which port are used by the add-on, check the :ref:`port-setup` section.
-Once you have setup the network you can follow the :ref:`quickstart` guide to start using the multi-user addon !
+Once you have set up the network you can follow the :ref:`quickstart` guide to start using the multi-user add-on !
.. _host-dedicated:
@@ -181,7 +176,7 @@ From the dedicated server
.. _port-setup:
-----------------------
-Port setup (optionnal)
+Port setup (optional)
-----------------------
The multi-user network architecture is based on a clients-server model. The communication protocol use four ports to communicate with client:
@@ -189,7 +184,7 @@ The multi-user network architecture is based on a clients-server model. The comm
* Commands: command transmission (such as **snapshots**, **change_rights**, etc.) [given port]
* Subscriber : pull data [Commands port + 1]
* Publisher : push data [Commands port + 2]
-* TTL (time to leave) : used to ping each clients [Commands port + 3]
+* TTL (time to leave) : used to ping each client [Commands port + 3]
To know which ports will be used, you just have to read the port in your preference.
@@ -206,4 +201,4 @@ In the picture below we have setup our port to **5555** so it will be:
* Publisher: 5557 (**5555** +2)
* TTL: 5558 (**5555** +3)
-Those four ports needs to be accessible from the client otherwise it wont work at all !
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+Those four ports need to be accessible from the client otherwise it won't work at all !
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